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Draw Me Closer To Your Light

Draw me closer to your light and bring me farther away from this world of concrete Angels and sleuths Anoint me with your grace Lord and make me thine own I rather live in communion with you, than any place on earth.

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/18/2024 10:35:00 AM

glorious devotional, vie...a keeper this one coming from your spiritual core!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/20/2024 3:45:00 PM

Your a keeper yourself Nette, a jewel in the friendship pool Merry Christmas dear heart

Jan Allison

Date: 12/18/2024 10:15:00 AM

what a lovely prayer Vie:-) hugs jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/20/2024 3:45:00 PM

So glad you liked it Jan, keep well and Merry Christmas with love for you and your family

Jay Narain

Date: 12/18/2024 9:41:00 AM

Beautiful prayer.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/20/2024 3:44:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting Jay :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/18/2024 4:42:00 AM

so touching poem, dear poet Rose, prayers will be answered one day, thanks a lot

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/20/2024 3:44:00 PM

They always are Yann if we are patient and stand firm in Faith, thank you for your kind visit.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/18/2024 4:35:00 AM

Beautiful prayer, Vie:)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/20/2024 3:44:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by Joanna

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/18/2024 2:02:00 AM

Ohhh yess, exactly what my spiritual self too aches for!! This world is a web, trapping us in its materialistic charms and beauty, but what will matter in the end, is the glory of the divine and our good deeds. Kindness, empathy, affection and light for all are some virtues which can draw us closer to the presence of the Almighty... And you've described that so impeccably here! Loved reading your words, as always, sweet Rose... Sending you light and love.. Keep shining and writing always.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/20/2024 3:43:00 PM

your words are always so kind and so inspiring to my soul, Thank you