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Draw Me a World

..........Draw Me a World...... Draw me a world with God at its core. Undaunted to be learned in classical literature! Draw me a world where a man knows he and only he, is master of his human destiny! Draw me is world where living for a superficial prize, is but a sad vacuity! Draw me a world where I give to others, and realize so fully, we are all brothers! Draw me a world not out to destroy good leaders, fired up by evil, frenzy-feeders! Draw me a world, where all children can  worship you in safely, in high acclaim! Draw me a world, so when the day rises, I turn my life over to you, totally in acquiescent and enraptured praises! 5/5/2019  

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Date: 5/6/2019 4:51:00 PM
"Draw me a world where I give to others, and realize so fully, we are all brothers!" That is ALL we truly need. Let's draw it, and live it. Please!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/6/2019 5:19:00 PM
Right on, Caren))))) Panagiota.
Date: 5/6/2019 2:38:00 PM
I just love this one; it's the kind of world you and I desire---although I suspect that many would not be too enthusiastic about it today. Well-drawn, Madame Artiste! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 5/6/2019 3:30:00 PM
I am not being arrogant, but I share your love for this poem. I need to get my head on straight sometimes and stop looking for slaps on the back. You know who is the "Best" and I mean,the ONE. I do know worldly award vanish like smoke. Thanks for the honor of visiting.Aprreciated, Panagiota