Draw Me a World



..........Draw Me a World......

Draw me a world with God at its core.
Undaunted to be learned in classical
literature!

Draw me a world where a man knows
he and only he, is master of his human destiny!

Draw me is world where living for a
superficial prize, is but a sad vacuity!

Draw me a world where I give to others,
and realize so fully, we are all brothers!

Draw me a world not out to destroy good
leaders, fired up by evil, frenzy-feeders!

Draw me a world, where all children can 
worship you in safely, in high acclaim!

Draw me a world, so when the day rises,
I turn my life over to you, totally in
acquiescent and enraptured praises!

5/5/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 5/6/2019 4:51:00 PM
"Draw me a world where I give to others, and realize so fully, we are all brothers!" That is ALL we truly need. Let's draw it, and live it. Please!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/6/2019 5:19:00 PM
Right on, Caren))))) Panagiota.
Date: 5/6/2019 2:38:00 PM
I just love this one; it's the kind of world you and I desire---although I suspect that many would not be too enthusiastic about it today. Well-drawn, Madame Artiste! Best wishes, Gershon
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/6/2019 3:30:00 PM
I am not being arrogant, but I share your love for this poem. I need to get my head on straight sometimes and stop looking for slaps on the back. You know who is the "Best" and I mean,the ONE. I do know worldly award vanish like smoke. Thanks for the honor of visiting.Aprreciated, Panagiota
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