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when you guess, I know living unveils hidden depths~ the bottomless well Written: January 22, 2023

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Date: 1/24/2023 3:52:00 PM

Our surface is realized, Lasaad, all else is a guess--nicely written, Aloha William

Date: 1/23/2023 6:27:00 PM

Life is a bottomless well ... a haiku deep like a well !

Date: 1/23/2023 2:21:00 PM

very cool KU, my friend. Love how you rhymed it also

Date: 1/23/2023 6:33:00 AM

I wonder where the bottom lies? Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Date: 1/23/2023 2:35:00 AM

- A very deep haiku, Las - hugs

Date: 1/22/2023 10:09:00 PM

No use guessing. As you say, a bottomless well.

Date: 1/22/2023 9:19:00 PM

Wow, this is so striking, in such few words! Beautiful haiku.

Date: 1/22/2023 7:11:00 PM

Deep and meaningful. A lovely haiku!

Date: 1/22/2023 3:40:00 PM

A stunning, beautiful poem :)