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Drastic Awareness

when you guess, I know
living unveils hidden depths~
the bottomless well


Written: January 22, 2023

Copyright © Sotto Poet | Year Posted 2023

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William Kelii Kekaula

January 24, 2023 at 3:52 PM

Our surface is realized, Lasaad, all else is a guess--nicely written, Aloha William

January 23, 2023 at 6:27 PM

Life is a bottomless well ... a haiku deep like a well !

Andrea Dietrich

January 23, 2023 at 2:21 PM

very cool KU, my friend. Love how you rhymed it also

January 23, 2023 at 6:33 AM

I wonder where the bottom lies? Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 23, 2023 at 2:35 AM

- A very deep haiku, Las - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

January 22, 2023 at 10:09 PM

No use guessing. As you say, a bottomless well.

Bj Legros Kelley

January 22, 2023 at 9:19 PM

Wow, this is so striking, in such few words! Beautiful haiku.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 22, 2023 at 7:11 PM

Deep and meaningful. A lovely haiku!

January 22, 2023 at 3:40 PM

A stunning, beautiful poem :)

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