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-drainpipes Rattle On - Tanka

drainpipes rattle on
as the downpour cleans the walk
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Cherl Dunn

May 3, 2014 at 1:09 PM

Nicely done enjoyed the read like the part about the clean side walk, cheri

Carrie Richards

April 30, 2014 at 9:28 AM

Again.......you have a way of surprising me, .....I am very flattered and honored that you regarded my poem worthy Deb, ...the latest contest was a challenge to me, such fascinating art with so many directions to go! Thank you for your approval!!