Drain

Fluid words pour
yet my mouth is still dry
morning washed ashore hours ago
many moons have passed
i am still explaining away
my life, my sanity
now i wear you around my neck
all that is left of us
i cannot cut the rope
that binds us
but i can't pull you closer
i struggle with the words
dripping down my chin
without meaning
this is getting us nowhere
i breathe you in
with painful gasps
take you everywhere with me
you're seeping out my pores
slowly
i'll get my freedom

for j. 1997
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Elle Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 6:58 PM
https://youtu.be/9n2VSe_lja4 "i breathe you in with painful gasps take you everywhere with me you're seeping out my pores slowly WE'LL get my freedom" This part resonated initially...and reminded me strongly of Breathing by Kate Bush. The whole of it is familiar to me having to live in that situation... but that was decade after you penned your experience. And I could not verbalize it so thank you....btw it is quite witchy...as in our craft and practices. And the overall balance in play of the varied contrasts occuring simutaneously. Like AFI's, "Will the flood behind me catch up before the fire inside me...."
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May 9, 2018 at 6:59 PM
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