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Within the cankerous catacombs of the slaving still Where torrential tears fall like rumbling rain As the decomposed dust gets its felonious fill And sanctioned sorrows receive their parasitic pain Where dichotomous dreams destroy the nightly nest And slumberous souls reminisce their restless rest As the Dragon turns to breathe its bereaving breath For all that abandonedly await for its defunctive death. July.20.2016 Two Stanzas - Two Only - Poetry Contest By Broken Wings rhyming scheme abab ccdd

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Date: 8/16/2016 1:49:00 AM
Wow! amazing write love the alliteration and how it adds to the drama!! Well done! Super 7
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Date: 8/16/2016 10:07:00 AM
Thank you so much James...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/26/2016 6:24:00 AM
That eye reminds me of "Lord of the Rings"... Congrats ^WW^ for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/27/2016 7:08:00 AM
Thank you Teddy...the Eye of the Rings lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/25/2016 7:51:00 PM
Winged Warrior, congratulations on your win, very good write and so heartbreaking . Thank you so very much for your congratulations on my poem , “Free Its Soul Bound Wild Stallion”. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/25/2016 8:14:00 PM
Thank you Eve..we all have experienced loss in one way or another...and create catacombs of despair(figuratively speaking of course)...with a ferocious dragon that keeps us trapped inside...the secret is...in due time is to defeat the dragon and escape our fears...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/25/2016 3:48:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win ^WW^:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2016 8:04:00 PM
Thank you Jan...always nice for having you visit my friend...god bless...and heavenly hug's to you...^WW^
Date: 7/25/2016 3:15:00 PM
WW, an awesome poem you have written here! Congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 7/25/2016 4:07:00 PM
Thank you Laura...you as well my friend...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/25/2016 3:05:00 PM
I see I chose the right one to compliment you on and now I will again because of your placement in BW's contest. Well done, my warrior! LOL at your last comment. I couldn't cheat.
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:40:00 PM
Thank you dear lady...your visit is always garnished with rose pedals...unless you prefer tulips lol...and I know how could you cheat(well) lol...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/23/2016 2:09:00 PM
I chose this one to comment upon because of the dragon theme. Great rhyming and use of double-lettered words together. I wish you well in the contest, dear one.
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Date: 7/23/2016 3:43:00 PM
Thank you, my dear Lady Lin...it is an honor to have you comment again...now tell the judge to pick me first, this time, lol...thank you Lin...always fun times with you...god bless you...and keep in touch...your friend...^WW^
Date: 7/20/2016 4:12:00 PM
great imagery and I love the alliteration ^WW^:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/20/2016 4:15:00 PM
Thank you, dear Jan...god, bless and many hugs...^WW^
Date: 7/20/2016 12:12:00 PM
Well composed my Warrior friend. Some great imagery
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Date: 7/20/2016 3:58:00 PM
Thank you, dear Tim...and, your image is even greater...god bless...^WW^