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Dragon Eyes

She enters a room like a storm as thunder rumbles in her wake. And a deluge of tears follows as the very ground seems to quake. She's an explosion of fireworks, as spectacular as the dawn. And unleashing flames of fury in a blinding flash, she is gone. A lady to be reckoned with, fire flares within her dragon eyes. And strikes fear in the hearts of men, exposing their secrets and lies. A source of fiery energy, her eyes illuminate the night. And her aura intensifies; to a glow of glorious light. (Quatrain) 7/31/2015

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Date: 8/5/2018 8:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Emile
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Date: 8/5/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thanks L. J., I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/2/2018 10:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 8/3/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate you support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/2/2018 4:12:00 PM
Such powerful imagery of the 'Dragon Lady', Emile! Congrats on your Podium win. Sandra
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Date: 8/2/2018 4:34:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate you encouraging support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/2/2018 2:56:00 PM
This begs to be a jazz song. Congrats!
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Date: 8/2/2018 3:48:00 PM
Thanks Dale, I appreciate you encouragement and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/2/2018 9:01:00 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Emile.
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Date: 8/2/2018 10:47:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate you support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/2/2018 8:30:00 AM
Whoa! Watch out men, myself included! Emile, in 16 lines you've certainly managed to create quite a portrait of fearsome femininity!! And congrats on your win in the contest! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 8/2/2018 10:46:00 AM
Thanks Gershon, I appreciate you insightful comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/8/2018 8:55:00 AM
Wow - she makes quite an impact. A most pleasant read, Emile.
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Date: 3/8/2018 9:44:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate you insightful comments. Emile.
Date: 8/7/2015 1:31:00 AM
G'day Emile... nicely constructed poem. The lady in your poem appears to be a matriarch who demands respect - regards - Lindsay
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Date: 8/7/2015 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay, she is the Dragon Lady in the series Game Of Thrones...I welcome your comments and support. Emile.
Date: 7/31/2015 9:39:00 PM
Awesome imagery here, Emile. You have captured the distinctive effect of a woman of such beauty, of intense personality, strong character and passionate expression. Again, well done, Emile. Kim
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Date: 8/3/2015 2:03:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate both your comments and your support. Emile.
Date: 7/31/2015 9:03:00 PM
An exquisite write which I enjoyed so much this morning! Thank you so much for sharing my dear friend, Emile. A 7+ from me. Have a great weekend! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 8/1/2015 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Leonora, I appreciate both your comments and your support. Emile.
Date: 7/31/2015 6:07:00 PM
I love all the energy you 've used in your post to describe this radiant beauty, lovely.
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Date: 8/1/2015 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine, I appreciate both your kind comments and your support. Emile.
Date: 7/31/2015 5:03:00 PM
I love the GoT books. I haven't watched the shows, but I think I recognize that as Daenerys Targaryan. I think the development of her character from the timid younger sister to the warrior dragon queen is one of the best in the series. I love the idea of a familial bloodline with some mysterious connection to dragons. I think your poem is a great tribute to the world and lore created by Mr. Martin.
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Date: 8/1/2015 8:40:00 AM
Thanks you so much, I appreciate both your detailed comments and your support. Emile.
Date: 7/31/2015 4:36:00 PM
Hello Emile, A "picture perfect" rhyme write here. The synergy between the picture of the beautiful lady you've posted and flow and tone of your write is spot-on!! I always have my famous Author's Notes with my works, but the photo you've posted here with your write "Dragon Eyes" narrative is certainly worth I would say a thousand words or more. A good call here and a wonderful poem. 7 + FAV!! Cheers, Gary
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/31/2015 4:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Gary, I always appreciate your wonderful comments and generous support. Emile.

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