Dragon Boat

the sky upends
as we cut the lake
quick white strokes 
in the dark current

the flow of bodies
a single bright ripple

somewhere in the space
between the blade tip
and water, it occurs:

the mind releases
the rain falls

silver salt scales
bloom across 
our arms and backs

rising, falling
like the breath
of a dragon

coursing out
each jagged
exhalation

all returns to water

the dull roar
in the distant horizon
calls us home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 5:17 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Julia. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 3:03 PM
"This aint Kansas, Toto. And. Oh, Auntie Em." Probably not what you had in mind, but your piece - which I find very interesting - brought the quotes to mind. Congrats on the selection. daver
Brown Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 6:47 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week Julia. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 2:59 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Julia
Ramage Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 8:55 PM
Excellent, one I can appreciate as my son use to row. Thank you great poem. Lee
Sumler Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 6:56 PM
Wow Julia this really a fantastic write! You got everything working here...a creative artwork full of imagery, mood, and poetic penmanship with an amazing title that surrounds the poem! Very beautiful!
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