Dracula Castle

( I visited the palace of Dracula in the year 2003 while attending The World Congress of Poets)at Iasi, Romania. If anyone interested to view Dracula Castle, I have placed a photo on my photo blog)

Deep in the Carpathian Mountains Perched atop on a rocky peak Is the castle of prince Dracula of Romania But his way to rule was quite unique. He was a ruler, a researcher, a law-maker And law-breaker, a lover of a different kind. His preferred method of torture was impalement Hammering nails into one’s head, Hacking of the limbs, burning alive Cutting of noses and ears, Mutilation of sexual organs And last, not the least, boiling alive. Inhuman cruelty infamous in history Stake would be forced through the body Till it immerged from the mouth. Like a scientist he made research On to make it slow to die. Strange were the ways for the welfare of people And what a way to keep people wealthy Poor, vagrant, beggars, and the cripples Were invited for the feast in a great hall. After the feast, ordered to set fire on the hall. What a way to solve poverty and over-population! Dracula had a mistress, a fair one who drove him To distraction but ready to please this moody man. Once she told him that she was with a child Dracula had her examined for veracity of her claim. When told, she was not with a child he drew his knife Cutting her open from groin to the breasts What a strange way to verify the truth and honesty.
============================================== Date: 1-27-14 Form: Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta Third Place Win Contest: Castles by Shadow Hamilton
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Kayode Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Congrats Dr.
Deschler Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 10:59 PM
I am very familiar with the history and the legends that surround Vlad Dracula. I would like to visit Romania, and see this castle one day. You retold his story very, very well in this poem. Great work, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your win, as well!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 7:12 PM
A most disturbing but well told story. Congratulations Dr. Ram
May Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
Kamoonpuri Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 11:54 AM
Congrats on yor win! The story poem narative was dark awesome quirky! Like a horror thriller.
Oyewole Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 11:36 AM
I enjoyed this Well informed write. Big congrats on your win.
Hamilton Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 11:54 PM
chilling Ram you have described it so well great poem congrats on3rd place ty for entering Shadow x smile hug
Sharma Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 11:27 PM
Very nice description and many congrats on your fine win.
Watson Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Whitby being one of my favourite places on earth . I have often sat on top of the very cliff Bram Stoker used to sit and write . I have often wondered if people like Mr Stoker drew their inspiration from reading the poets and story writers of his day. I'm sure he did , Just as I'm sure poets like yourself will provide inspiration for others . Superb poem.
Valentina Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 7:52 PM
I've visited this castle myself. It was magnificent with hidden stairways and beautiful furniture but Dracula "Vlad" the Impaler never lived in this castle. It belonged to his Great Grandfather and he most likely visited it. His true palace is in ruins. It is the castle that Bram Stoker used as inspiration for his book, so in essence it could be "Dracula's Castle" :). Horrifically mezmerizing poem, btw.
Loving Iii Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 12:58 PM
Facinating but horrorifying. Heaven has a special place for people like this. It blindness to salvation. Perhaps a purgatory preceded his final fate. And all he did was done unto himself. Fire of hell is not enough.
Dunn Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Well done doc great word expression, love every line in this castle write and great choose of subject matter. thanks for your comment and congrads. cheri
Abedin Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 2:19 PM
An unique poem.
Kendrick Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 11:32 AM
We would say today that this man was insane and needed to be locked away instead of him locking people away.. Sad that he did what he did for as long as he did..Interesting work about history..Sara
Chircop Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 10:42 AM
Ow ..I do have in mind to visit Dracula's castle in Romania..one time in my life..I really enjoyed your take on on the castle..and even learning more than I ever knew,what really hides in the dracula's heartless life.Awesome!!
Beam Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 8:51 AM
Nice write Ram I think Vlad was mad
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