Downward Spiral

The fog murks its way in front of me 
daylight fades into a lurid glow.
I drift loose as stones lost in my mind
hanging on to sanity by a fragile thread.

There’s a hunger within me that won’t abate 
to fix my personal planet to a fiery star, 
ride its path around the universe 
along with other constellations 
lighting luminous lamps burning the darkness.

Through an astrological lens, I pierce 
the sliver of a half-moon gleaming beside my star
prods me to relinquish a pervasive sense 
of hopelessness creeping into deep pools 
of sadness, losing myself totally 
and I am left with nothing 
but a mere whisper of dust.

I latch on instead to the tail of a comet 
hoping to land myself into a glorious sunset 
but it speeds us through space 
plunging me on a downward spiral 
toward a stygian oblivion.

@jjote 022121
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Neumann Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 3:11 AM
there often lies a new star behind the darkness of depression ...
Costales Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 2:20 PM
Thanks Kai for the read
Rose  Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Depression can do that to us dear poet. very well written, may your heart soar towards the stars of heaven instead, thank you for your kind visit.
Costales Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 1:16 PM
Thanks Rose, glad you appreciate this.
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