Downtown Train

Dropped a million
On a downtown train
Read a book about the devil
Cut myself with a red knife
Bled crazy
Still alive in this safe house
Chucking cards in a hat
In the pouring rain
Down the stairwell
In the middle of the street
I scream to Jesus
And bare my feet
It ain’t hard to believe 
When you’ve died
Gone to hell
On a downtown train
Yellow windows
Nothing to see
Conductor is blind
Has a one-eyed dog
Ain’t never been straight
Down the tunnel
And up the hill
St. Bartholomew was born to kill
I’m living a lie I never lived
I never died.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Breidenthal Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 10:09 PM
What a piece! I am impressed. Always, Laura
Collins Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 8:46 AM
Grim. Some great lines here Kilmer. These struck me: "On a downtown train Yellow windows Nothing to see" Thanks for pointing me to the St. Bartholomew's massacre. I vaguely remember reading about this in school. Maybe it's vague because it was Catholic School. love, Kathy
Collins Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 8:00 PM
I know I can count on help from you. Egads.
Kilmer Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 7:56 PM
Yeah I was feeling a bit grim when I wrote this, thinking about Chicago and the L-Train. Catholic school oh my. You will need professional help. :) ~Kilmer
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December 8, 2013 at 10:39 PM
wow,, what a book to read... Stephen,, a gripping train ride and ending... xox...LINDA
Kilmer Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 7:56 PM
Indeed. ~Kilmer
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