Downtown

Oh’ poor Mr. Brown
His heaven, is the bar downtown
At home he wished it be
But much scolding, endures he.

Stacey Brown 2-5-14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kimathi Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 11:10 AM
Hehehehe.... I loved this piece, Stacey!! ;-) If you get time, read my piece "The Night". It's bar-related, lol.
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Thanks my friend I will check out you writings
Austin Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 9:18 AM
No domestic bliss, put in such a clever way. Congrats on the selection. daver
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Thanks
Abai Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 8:53 AM
This is a great simplicity .. love it ! Good job
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 11:40 AM
Thank you for your kind words my friend
Andresen Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 11:49 AM
- Another good one - you are good with clerihew, Stacey !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Brown Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 12:19 PM
thanks again poetry friend!!
Smith Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 4:00 PM
This is perfect.....Tim
Brown Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 4:30 PM
thanks Tim! blessings, Stacey
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