Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Dizain

Down-To-Earth Heaven

Ha, everyone wants to go to Heaven,
But you, me, no one wants to die for it,
You can't bet your life if it's there even,
It's a hearsay, you just read about it;
You live your life once then forever quit.

If you are so driven, level with me,
What would you trust and what do you decree--
Torah, Bible, Koran, Ramayana?
They are all true as I happen to see;
Heaven's here on earth, So is Nirvana!




~'Dezain Me' contest by Dr. Ram Mehta

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Skat A February 15, 2015 at 10:35 AM Abdul ~ Congratulations on the win. It's an honor to read every poem In Dr Ram's DAZAIN ME contest. *Skat LOVE*

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2015 at 10:37 PM Very good one for the what you are trying to portray. Congrats for your win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 4, 2015 at 11:52 PM COngratulations Abdul.. :)! Love the thought,.. :)!!!..olive eloisa.. :)!

Sandra Haight February 3, 2015 at 2:26 PM Abdul, congratulations on your 1st Place win. Very interesting philosophy your present! Sandra

Barbara Gorelick February 3, 2015 at 1:51 PM How wonderful for you! Congrats on your insightful and rather amusing win..

Mohan Chutani February 3, 2015 at 8:17 AM very true, congrats for top win.

Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 7:29 AM So is Nirvana.... a beautiful poem... congrats on your win Abdul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 3, 2015 at 7:15 AM Congrats Abdul on win)))rajat

Jan Allison February 3, 2015 at 6:30 AM Many congrats on your win Abdul:-) hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta February 3, 2015 at 5:13 AM Thanks for participating in my contest and congrats on the win, Abdul