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Downfall

I can't read the writing on the wall The free hand print there is way too small If I could just turn the volume up I might find a way out of this cover up But here I sit dissecting my downfall Many were the voices who Spoke about the things they knew The columns as they stood before Now turned to rubble strewn on the floor As suspicious whispers just grew and grew Time will surely tell the truth and Maybe video will become the sleuth Meanwhile we'll just say our prayers As they extend to be billionaires Faith is now placed in our youth...and Here I sit dissecting my downfall...yeah Sitting here dissecting my downfall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/14/2016 4:54:00 PM
Scott, congratulations on your win with this dark and powerful write, 7
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Scott Williams
Date: 3/21/2016 10:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Broken.
Date: 3/14/2016 2:04:00 PM
Hi Scott, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad
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Scott Williams
Date: 3/21/2016 10:13:00 PM
Thank you, Vlad.
Date: 3/13/2016 10:38:00 AM
Scott, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/13/2016 10:34:00 PM
Linda, Thanks for including me in this great group of writers. I will definitely check out your blog. I can't wait to see it.
Date: 3/2/2016 3:56:00 PM
Dark, sad and pessimistic. nonetheless, I really like it!
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Date: 3/3/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. I always appreciate your words of encouragement.
Date: 3/2/2016 7:23:00 AM
Scott, I really like the darkness within your amazing write, and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 3/2/2016 7:32:00 AM
Thanks a lot BW.I appreciate your feedback.