Downer
downer
drawn in
an ocean
of disappointment
hit the bottom
running out
of air
made an
effort to
try to swim
back up to
the surface
was not successful
ran out of steam
half way up
ran out of air
half way there
died from lack
of emotional air
Copyright © Shari Thomas | Year Posted 2017
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