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Down To Earth

old people seem more level headed ~ has gravity taken its toll


It only seems that way Poetry Contest
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25/03/21 syllable Counter (17)PS

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Brian Sambourne Date: 4/27/2021 9:34:00 AM Clever and engaging! Well written, David. Enjoyed the humor. Best wishes, Brian Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 4/27/2021 9:48:00 AM Thank you Brian, if old age doesn’t level you, gravity certainly will, cheers David

L Milton Hankins Date: 3/25/2021 9:38:00 AM I suspect you're right on, David! We're more than level-headed. There's a definite down trend all over the body! Good read, Friend. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 3/25/2021 9:50:00 AM Thanks Milton, yep it’s definitely the gravity at work, but age brings wisdom and more balance to the mind, cheers David

Gary Radice Date: 3/25/2021 4:17:00 AM Very clever and love the title. :) Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 3/25/2021 4:55:00 AM Heya Gary, funny you say that, the title took longer to figure out, I needed something to bring the equation together, cheers David