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Down To Earth

old people seem more level headed ~ has gravity taken its toll


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25/03/21 syllable Counter (17)PS

Copyright © David Kavanagh | Year Posted 2021

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Brian Sambourne

April 27, 2021 at 9:34 AM

Clever and engaging! Well written, David. Enjoyed the humor. Best wishes, Brian

April 27, 2021 at 9:48 AM

Thank you Brian, if old age doesn’t level you, gravity certainly will, cheers David

L Milton Hankins

March 25, 2021 at 9:38 AM

I suspect you're right on, David! We're more than level-headed. There's a definite down trend all over the body! Good read, Friend.

March 25, 2021 at 9:50 AM

Thanks Milton, yep it’s definitely the gravity at work, but age brings wisdom and more balance to the mind, cheers David

March 25, 2021 at 4:17 AM

Very clever and love the title. :)

March 25, 2021 at 4:55 AM

Heya Gary, funny you say that, the title took longer to figure out, I needed something to bring the equation together, cheers David

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