down them flakes drop'd

.
                            particle by frozen
                                    particle
                           land'n top mine all
                                      feets
                                 shoulderz
                                     dome (well i got's thuh cap on)
                           crystals from thuh
                                 firmament
                        Yahweh         me
                                     Loves
                                    and you
                                    and you 
                                    and you and you and you
                                                               ((and y'all))
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