Down the Town

wearing my brand new top I am dressed up as myself ready for gazing appraisals going out this Friday night hey hands up hug me gently feeling my breathing chest make promise what I do not teach you you shall not learn before

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/18/2024 11:59:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Rich Szczerzyszczynsky

Date: 4/4/2017 10:37:00 PM

I am opened for a critic. Please make any notes about gramma or style. This is the way how I can improve my English.