Down the Town

wearing my brand new top
I am dressed up as myself
ready for gazing 
appraisals
going out this Friday night
hey
hands up

hug me gently
feeling my breathing chest
make promise

what I do not teach you 
you shall not learn before
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 11:59 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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April 4, 2017 at 10:37 PM
I am opened for a critic. Please make any notes about gramma or style. This is the way how I can improve my English.
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