Mystic Rose Rose Poet Pantoum

Down the Rabbit Hole

a green forest canopy and all that lies beneath 
all the beauty one adores right between the eyes 
soaring birds, strong eagle wings, swooping trees 
emerald ferns and fairies, full of fairy dust 

all the beauty one adores right between the eyes 
chanterelle mushrooms thriving in a rich black soil 
emerald ferns and fairies, full of fairy dust 
hippogriffs and unicorns, thestral horse's tail   

chanterelle mushrooms thriving in a rich black soil 
aside a four leaf clover lucking it in plushy style
hippogriffs and unicorns, thestral horse's tail 
pedestrians with smiles following the trail 

aside a four leaf clover lucking it in plushy style 
Alice wanders bout the Hatter and the grinning cat 
pedestrians with smiles following the trail
hopping like jack rabbits down the rabbit hole 

Alice wanders bout the Hatter and the grinning cat 
soaring birds, strong eagle wings, swooping trees 
hopping like jack rabbits down the rabbit hole 
a green forest canopy and all that lies beneath. 

April 4, 2022

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Joseph May August 28, 2022 at 9:51 AM Congrats on your win Vie, Wonderful write

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 5, 2022 at 10:15 AM A delightful, whimsical revisiting of the beloved classic. Thank you for sharing this lovely pantoum, which is in my faves. ;)

L Milton Hankins April 4, 2022 at 8:47 AM Oh, how I enjoyed reading this, M.S.S. It transported me back to Alice in Wonderland, but also brought up thoughts of strolls through my meadow. Good writing! Mystic Rose Rose April 4, 2022 at 12:18 PM Thank you Milton, not one of my easiest forms of writing, this one twisted my brain lol, glad I could please,