Down Malvinia Street

You shadowed my bob 
Down Malvinia Street
As we held hands,
Hid my awkwardness
Carrying both our bags
High School Memories
With a smile:-)


01-08-2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 9:23 PM
that is just what puppy love is all about. Congrats for your win.
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:26 PM
((())) :>) CONGRATS!!! SK
Lamoureux Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 8:04 AM
Lovely nostalgic piece. Congrats.
Inman Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:27 AM
Sweet imagery. Enjoyed your poem very much, Thabang.
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 4:31 AM
such lovely memories my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:52 AM
A really cool write, Thabang, a nice picture. Well done. Regards, Viv
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:05 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning sweet write Thabang!
Nance Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 8:05 PM
Aww sweet high school sweethearts, nicely done
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