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Down, Down, Down the Rabbit Hole

I remember a time when I surfaced to breathe and the air outside was as pure as can be I remember a time when life was so simple that the stars in the sky were all full of twinkle The world changed volte-face and I lost my pace the tea cups were bare and Alice was spent I searched for my dreams with mad discontent as the moon in the sky turned to concrete cement One summer day the tea party ended and needless to say I lost the gold key Into the cave I fell and I fended as the sun without light held nothing for me I remember a time when freedom was mine without the amends, I never consigned. December 20, 2021 Sponsor Edward Ibeh Contest Name Pick-A-Title, Vol 27 I chose down down down the rabbit hole

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Date: 1/1/2022 11:33:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Mystic:-) You pulled off the theme quite seamlessly. Well-done!
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Date: 12/31/2021 9:58:00 PM
"I remember a time when freedom was mine without the amends" - Beautiful longing and nostalgia. Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/23/2021 3:45:00 AM
A good entry Vie into the contest. An atmospheric write...Delice
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Date: 12/21/2021 7:42:00 PM
Hello Vie ... I hope I read this right. The world of a child; turning into an adult; dreaming about the carefree days of childhood. Even if I'm wrong, I still enjoyed reading your sonnet Vie - Lindsay
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Date: 12/21/2021 12:27:00 PM
I think Edward will enjoy your entry very much.It is wonderfully conceived. Have a very Mele Kalikimaka! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 12/21/2021 8:31:00 AM
A great sonnet. A mystic one too.
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Date: 12/21/2021 8:42:00 AM
Thank you Chris for your kind visit my page :)
Date: 12/21/2021 2:28:00 AM
I think it is incredible but I skimmed through the book and I should have paid more attention. A lovely rendition for the contest and wish you the best of luck. Greetings.
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Date: 12/21/2021 8:41:00 AM
Thank you dear Victor for stopping by :)
Date: 12/20/2021 11:00:00 AM
Much better than finding a mole down the hole that became a fashion statement . . . .
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Date: 12/21/2021 8:41:00 AM
thank you Rico for the comment, :)

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