Down, Down, Down the Rabbit Hole

I remember a time when I surfaced to breathe and the air outside was as pure as can be I remember a time when life was so simple that the stars in the sky were all full of twinkle The world changed volte-face and I lost my pace the tea cups were bare and Alice was spent I searched for my dreams with mad discontent as the moon in the sky turned to concrete cement One summer day the tea party ended and needless to say I lost the gold key Into the cave I fell and I fended as the sun without light held nothing for me I remember a time when freedom was mine without the amends, I never consigned. December 20, 2021 Sponsor Edward Ibeh Contest Name Pick-A-Title, Vol 27 I chose down down down the rabbit hole
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Ibeh Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 11:33 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Mystic:-) You pulled off the theme quite seamlessly. Well-done!
Alex Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 9:58 PM
"I remember a time when freedom was mine without the amends" - Beautiful longing and nostalgia. Great writing. Congratulations!
Skelly Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 3:45 AM
A good entry Vie into the contest. An atmospheric write...Delice
Laurie Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 7:42 PM
Hello Vie ... I hope I read this right. The world of a child; turning into an adult; dreaming about the carefree days of childhood. Even if I'm wrong, I still enjoyed reading your sonnet Vie - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 12:27 PM
I think Edward will enjoy your entry very much.It is wonderfully conceived. Have a very Mele Kalikimaka! Blessings xxoo
Alex Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 8:31 AM
A great sonnet. A mystic one too.
Rose  Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 8:42 AM
Thank you Chris for your kind visit my page :)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 2:28 AM
I think it is incredible but I skimmed through the book and I should have paid more attention. A lovely rendition for the contest and wish you the best of luck. Greetings.
Rose  Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 8:41 AM
Thank you dear Victor for stopping by :)
Leffanta Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Much better than finding a mole down the hole that became a fashion statement . . . .
Rose  Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 8:41 AM
thank you Rico for the comment, :)
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