Paula Goldsmith Poet Haiku

Down, Down, Down the Rabbit Hole

Down the rabbit hole
I fell hard and I went deep
I need to dig out

 

 

Date Written: 12/5/2021

2.) Down, Down, Down The Rabbit Hole
5 7 5 on Soup
Pick-A-Title, Vol 27 Poetry Contest                                                                      Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Gershon Wolf December 6, 2021 at 6:03 PM Just think: Once you finally 'dig out.' You'll be (a) 'dug out!' Smiles, Gershon Paula Goldsmith December 7, 2021 at 10:21 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this funny Rabbit write. I am trying to climb out. Help!!! Have a blessed day/week...............

Evelyn Judy Buehler December 6, 2021 at 11:11 AM Did you happen to notice a small cake, with the message 'Eat me?' Perhaps if you grew...A wonderful and imaginative contest entry, Paula. It's a fave for me. Paula Goldsmith December 6, 2021 at 11:31 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. I did not see a small cake. Did I see fave??? WOW!!! You just made my day. "Thanks" Have a blessed day/week...............

Delice Arleen Skelly December 6, 2021 at 2:45 AM Paula, this is a good entry into the contest, hope you are rescued soon...Delice Paula Goldsmith December 6, 2021 at 8:37 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like my rabbit hole write. Yes, please rescue me. Have a blessed day/week...............