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Down, Down, Down the Rabbit Hole

Down the rabbit hole I fell hard and I went deep I need to dig out Date Written: 12/5/2021 2.) Down, Down, Down The Rabbit Hole 5 7 5 on Soup Pick-A-Title, Vol 27 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/6/2021 6:03:00 PM

Just think: Once you finally 'dig out.' You'll be (a) 'dug out!' Smiles, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/7/2021 10:21:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this funny Rabbit write. I am trying to climb out. Help!!! Have a blessed day/week...............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/6/2021 11:11:00 AM

Did you happen to notice a small cake, with the message 'Eat me?' Perhaps if you grew...A wonderful and imaginative contest entry, Paula. It's a fave for me.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/6/2021 11:31:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. I did not see a small cake. Did I see fave??? WOW!!! You just made my day. "Thanks" Have a blessed day/week...............

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 12/6/2021 2:45:00 AM

Paula, this is a good entry into the contest, hope you are rescued soon...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/6/2021 8:37:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my rabbit hole write. Yes, please rescue me. Have a blessed day/week...............