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Down By the Lake

Down by the lake my old haunts ache Lonely are they as I used to be No mallard ducks to swim on the sea Just one autumn leaf to recall you and me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 4/1/2020 6:31:00 PM
How melancholy, memory touched with sorrow..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/1/2020 7:48:00 PM
Thanks for appreciating that there can be beauty in melancholy, Michelle. Take care, Gershon
Date: 4/1/2020 8:08:00 AM
Very nicely written. Really love the last two lines.Well done.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/1/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kenneth. I'm trying hard; occasionally something works. Stay healthy! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 3/31/2020 4:43:00 PM
Beautiful, Gershon! As the old saw goes, you certainly have a way with words. May your well of verse never run dry, my friend. Many thanks for taking time to comment on Pray Without Ceasing and hunker down and stay safe - Bob
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/31/2020 6:52:00 PM
Thanks for the compliment and for the stirring comment, Bob. Here's to good health! Blessings, Gershon

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