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Faerie poem inspired by Caren Krutsinger

Down By the Blue Lake

down by the blue lake
the pink faerie elongates
feeling rather small
underneath the umbrella
of the rosemallow forest

1/2/2019

*A rosemallow is a hibiscus flower
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 12:00 AM
The imagery makes my heart leap. I had no idea this flower had a beautiful second name.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 5:37 AM
Thanks, Caren! :)
Faulkner Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Enchanting! (and I learned something, too!)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 3:47 PM
Thank you and yay!
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 2:33 PM
I find this to be the most adorable imagery!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 3:15 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! :)
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