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poem written as an introduction to a chapter in my book of memoir vignettes, Shoebox Stories.

DOWN BY OLD DUCK CREEK

Morning light drifts soft and meek  
through cottonwoods that lean and speak,  
their shadows brushing childhood’s cheek  
down by old Duck Creek.  

Barefoot summers, warm and slow,  
grass stains where our young dreams would grow,  
the world felt small enough to know  
down by old Duck Creek.  

Cicadas hummed their dusty tune,  
a cloudless Texas sky in June,  
and time moved gentle as the moon  
down by old Duck Creek.  

Now memory walks where I once ran,  
a grown heart holding what it can,  
still hearing God in wind and sand  
down by old Duck Creek.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Wolf Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 7:21 PM
Every stanza a gem... and the 4th - Wow. I see a 'play' on its second line: A groan heart holding what it still can... And the invocation of God in its third line is simply perfect. Love it. Thanks, Sara.
George Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 9:07 PM
Another gem. Flows like a jingling creek. Again into my FAVE.
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 6:46 AM
Lovely flow ~
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