Black Eyed Susan Poet Limerick

Down and Out

“Stay away, I can’t afford to be sick.
Hand sanitizer please, and make it quick!
I can’t have the flu,”
I moaned as I puked -
“I’m out of Tylenol, Nyquil, and Vics!”


12/30/11
For "Sneezing Limerick" contest

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Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2012 at 10:53 PM hey, didn't this one win? I really liked it, Susan!! WEll, here I am again, late as usual. I need to do some other things. It will be forever until I can get to my shows. DANG. SEe ya tomorrow. LUv, andrea

The Situation January 2, 2012 at 3:20 PM Situation is an alter ego. With a hidden identity. To explain I had to choose between her and someone else. I chose else.

The Situation December 30, 2011 at 7:49 PM i can't have the flu; thats the most important thing in the world to me now. T. S.

Russell Sivey December 30, 2011 at 2:29 PM Ha Ha! This is a great Limerick Susan! Perfect for the contest...you will do well!! Awesome Work!

Andrea Dietrich December 30, 2011 at 1:38 PM Good going, Susan!! Your meter is pretty good too! Luv, Andrea

Debra Squyres December 30, 2011 at 11:47 AM Ohhhh myyyy!! This is good. A delightful read !!! God Bless you !!!