Get Your Premium Membership

Down and Dirty

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Lewis Raynes.


This is fiction and does not represent anything to do with my work, it is in preparation for a poetry contest.

The rain had passed leaving fields of mud, Mud to work with, to rest and to play. Mud in our shoes, in our pants, in our hair, Mud to brighten the rest of our day. My girl and I, we worked the sheep, Counting, marking and drenching together. We tackled and fell, dragging each to the side, And did it both dressed in full leather. When we completed the sheep, all ewes and one ram, We relaxed with a beer on the ute. And we talked open talk about how lucky we are, And I told her, in mud, she looked cute. She whipped my legs out and laughed down at me, Our day it was done by two thirty. So I pulled her to the mud, and within half an hour, We had both gotten down and got dirty.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/25/2016 8:34:00 PM
this is realy cute, Lewis how you played on that expression. Great job and congrats for your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/25/2016 7:25:00 PM
ah Lewis- so filthy cute lol :)congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2016 9:49:00 PM
Lewis, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. :):):) Stop by my latest blog "Last Laugh." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Date: 7/28/2016 7:09:00 AM
Good muddy fun xxx great poem x
Login to Reply
Raynes Avatar
Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/31/2016 8:06:00 PM
mud is always fun... lol, thanks Wendy
Date: 7/27/2016 4:45:00 PM
Lewis is an organic soul. Hugging mother earth with words that ring true. Born from dirt and still wanting to flirt. Sounds like an Aussie with a mate to take shape.
Login to Reply
Raynes Avatar
Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/27/2016 6:23:00 PM
Thanks Holly, mud is fun, animals are animals , and to be an animal in mud is terrific.
Date: 7/26/2016 9:25:00 PM
Filthy pair . . . : )
Login to Reply
Raynes Avatar
Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/27/2016 6:22:00 PM
mud sheep friends, beer ... great day
Date: 7/26/2016 4:17:00 PM
haha love it, what a fun, flirty and really dirty write :)
Login to Reply
Raynes Avatar
Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/27/2016 6:22:00 PM
i suspect heaps of people would love to live this for a day

Book: Reflection on the Important Things