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Down a Storm Drain

I’m crying because I dropped Heather Down a storm drain, now she's gone forever My Mum says that Heather is just make believe So she’ll be no help to get poor Heather out As my heart it doth bleed and my soul it doth plead Not quite sure what I should do next Maybe call 999 requesting some help But having no phone I cry, I'm perplexed Whilst a crowd is beginning to gather When they see me, a child all alone Tears pour from my eyes as I blabber They do not comprehend when I speak of my friend Then all of a sudden a tap on my shoulder I felt a few times, as it became bolder I twisted around to the glorious sound of her voice and her sweet smiling face Taking one look at me all swollen and red Her hug and her voice it did calm me instead Whatever had happened to cause such distress I told her my fears why I’d burst into tears I asked how she’d managed to climb from the drain For my crying and shouting had all been in vain Heather told me she magically wafted above When she saw my distress and my undying love A crowd that had gathered saw us walk down the lane Hand in hand, two sweet girls, now both happy again A neighbour of ours who had witnessed the scene Described it to Mum telling what she had seen So now Mum believes, though she still can’t see Heather My make believe friend she’ll be with me forever Written 10th March 2019 Contest: Down a Storm Drain Gone Forever Sponsor: Eve Roper 2nd place Contest YOUR CHOICE(4),any form,any theme Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 3/23/2019 5:30:00 AM
A magical story of make believe come to life!..Congrats on your win Ann..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/23/2019 6:14:00 AM
Well thank you so much James for your congrats and your visit, which is always appreciated. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/23/2019 3:14:00 AM
This poem is so different Ann - you have a very imaginative mind, no wonder you had an imaginary friend! I thoroughly enjoyed your poem dear Ann and hearty congratulations on your win! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/23/2019 3:35:00 AM
Oh I am so glad you liked it Jennifer, yes I do have a vivid imagination although I cannot remember an imaginary friend. So good to hear from you Jennifer and I appreciate your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/22/2019 8:16:00 PM
what a charming poem Ann I have heard of children having imaginary friends, you have such a vivid imagination and made this so real:-) hugs jan xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/23/2019 3:30:00 AM
Thanks Jan, although I never had an imaginary friend, my granddaughter often spoke of her friend up until the age of four and like you say many children do speak of a little friend, so real to them. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/22/2019 4:27:00 PM
Ann, thank you for entering my contest. You had clear and fascinating imagery and great rhythm and flow..Congratulations on your 2nd place win. . Come and visit me on my blog https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=35331&PoetID=57242
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/22/2019 7:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve for my 2nd place in your lovely contest, for which I thoroughly enjoyed writing my poem. with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/10/2019 10:13:00 AM
Super piece Ann, really great imaginative thoughts with good rhyme and flow too. Have great weekend, Gordon
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/10/2019 11:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Gordon for your lovely comments, hope you are well and have had a good weekend. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/10/2019 8:01:00 AM
This is my favorite poem of all for this particular contest prompt, and I wrote something myself. I have no idea what now. Wow! What a terrific imagination Ann, and your rhymes are fabulous!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/10/2019 8:54:00 AM
Wow Caren such wonderful comments, thank you so much! I have been away since the 4th and feel my muse Rose is still having a doze, as the words did not come easily, so to hear how much you liked it has inspired me to continue. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

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