Down

With little regret they have left
flown upon the barest breeze
floated upon an updraft weightless.

Currents unseen have stirred the oval frames
formed in the early light of fragrant Spring
and lifted from the pistils core, the wing.

How high, beyond the branches they did fly
and float, upon the shred of taciturn air to ground
to lay in porcelain fragility upon the greenest grass.

They rest now, upon the pastures mossy green
and curl their edges inward, as do we all,
when left to lay ‘pon holy ground. 


Date: 1/23/13
Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Burch Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 9:54 AM
oh Highness!! This reminds me of how I love to find a fluffy lump of down from a soaring hawk...well done...love you bunches...Cap'n deb
Burns Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 1:15 PM
Absolutely lovely flow of words..
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 7:38 AM
this is beautiful, Debs. Is it for Gail's contest.
Henderson Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 1:35 AM
Saw some of it today, on my lawn. A nuisance but I love it. A nice aura about this poem Deb.
Wilson Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 10:16 PM
quite stirring Debbie! well done...love,Deb
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