Down

. A Man Jonah By name ran From God by going Down_ to Joppa Went Down_in a boat to run away from God paid the Fare went down in the hull and went to sleep each step brought him down and away from God

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Farah Chamma

Date: 2/9/2010 2:11:00 AM

Nice write. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. ALways, Farah

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/8/2010 1:30:00 PM

thanks for your support and comments!! very nice work here!! Love, DAC

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 2/8/2010 3:44:00 AM

An interesting write Sara gets the mind going thanks for all your support Daniel

Brian Strand

Date: 2/7/2010 11:53:00 PM

This form gets more difficult beyond line five Sara,both artistically and visually with wraparound problems of computer pages.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Noel Villarosa

Date: 2/7/2010 11:47:00 PM

This one is surpassingly good, Sara, as this form of poetry requires talent and determination. An exalting eulogy that one be reminded spiritually. Appreciate your comment always. (^_^) Noel

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/7/2010 2:05:00 PM

Nice write Sara and this Bible story has a great message so I hope all will go and read... happy Sunday as I prepare for my Super Bowl Sunday bash.. enjoyed..luv.. Linda-Marie..

June Ellen Smith

Date: 2/7/2010 12:25:00 PM

I want to thank you for all your feedback. I'm glad you like my poems. I've been writing them all of my life. I'm 53 now. I was published on another website years ago. I had to buy the books. I gave them to my son. My life, my kids, grandkids, parents, grandparents, music, my house, nature and God inspires my work. I like your poems too. June Ellen

Richard-Jamaal Keen

Date: 2/7/2010 11:51:00 AM

Creative way to describe a man growing away from God, and thanks for all your comments Sara!

Oleg Borisov

Date: 2/7/2010 5:27:00 AM

Allegorical stairway to hell. Impressively. Thanks for your comment, Sara.