Down

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A 
Man
Jonah
By name ran
From God by going
Down_ to Joppa
Went Down_in a boat to run away from God paid the
Fare went down in the hull and went to sleep each step brought him down and away from God

faithforgivenessinspirationalintrospectiongodgodfibonacci

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Farah Chamma

February 9, 2010 at 2:11 AM

Nice write. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. ALways, Farah

Doris Culverhouse

February 8, 2010 at 1:30 PM

thanks for your support and comments!! very nice work here!! Love, DAC

Daniel Cheeseman

February 8, 2010 at 3:44 AM

An interesting write Sara gets the mind going thanks for all your support Daniel

Brian Strand

February 7, 2010 at 11:53 PM

This form gets more difficult beyond line five Sara,both artistically and visually with wraparound problems of computer pages.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Noel Villarosa

February 7, 2010 at 11:47 PM

This one is surpassingly good, Sara, as this form of poetry requires talent and determination. An exalting eulogy that one be reminded spiritually. Appreciate your comment always. (^_^) Noel

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 7, 2010 at 2:05 PM

Nice write Sara and this Bible story has a great message so I hope all will go and read... happy Sunday as I prepare for my Super Bowl Sunday bash.. enjoyed..luv.. Linda-Marie..

June Ellen Smith

February 7, 2010 at 12:25 PM

I want to thank you for all your feedback. I'm glad you like my poems. I've been writing them all of my life. I'm 53 now. I was published on another website years ago. I had to buy the books. I gave them to my son. My life, my kids, grandkids, parents, grandparents, music, my house, nature and God inspires my work. I like your poems too. June Ellen