Doubtless

I Know

If I should abandon myself
In the seed of your heart,
I know, I would germinate.
If I should cry
In the lines of your palms,
I know, you would dry my tears.
If I should confide myself
In the sea of your love,
I know, I would not drown.
If I should lose my sight
In your brighter light,
I know, I would go no blind.
If I should lose my tongue
In the preaching of your course,
I know, you would not let me down.
If I should lose my hands
In your forever fullness,
I know, I would not be wretched.
If I should abandon myself
In the beauty of your mind,
I know, I would not regret.
If I should forget myself
In the caressing of your soul,
I know, my life would not be the same.
If I should take the bold step
And scale through those narrow paths to you
I know I would be victorious
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 5:11 PM
Abdulhafeez, thanks for supporting my one WORD title contest. Enjoy the win. ~SKAT~
Mehta Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 7:49 AM
Enjoyed the write. Congrats on the win,
A   Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 11:08 AM
Abdulhafeez... Congratulations! Enjoying every entry, ENTERED in my "Any Poem #26" contest. Always & Forever *LINDA"
May Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 4:49 PM
Great write AO...congrats on your win
Kayode Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 9:28 AM
Great one Oyewole, congrats on your winning. Kayod5.
Mehta Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 12:29 AM
IT impressed me too and congrats on the win,
Mannan Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 10:55 PM
Very beautiful. Many congrats Abdulhafeez.
A   Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 8:10 PM
"an awesome win. always & forever *LINDA"
A  Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 7:09 PM
Abdulhafeez, Congratulations, glad you decided to enter this free verse in my contest. :-) love ~ SKAT~
Maloloyon Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 7:30 PM
i like this one, but I feel it would be unfair to you (as we readers) to put the punctuation marks,for I know we can not give justice for a well crafted poem as this.This is a powerful poem no doubt. and personally I would like to read it with your intended punctuation marks.that would complete the pleasure of reading this. nicely done.that's just a simple request as a friend AO, happy writing
Oyewole Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 9:36 AM
I will punctuate it as requested by you. Thanks for the visit.
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 8:34 AM
VEry nice, and I love how you ended it with "I know I would be victorious" Doubtless makes a great title for this.
Oyewole Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 11:15 AM
Thanks my lady for dropping by.
Mohammed Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 10:44 AM
This is just fantastic.Well done!
Oyewole Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 11:15 AM
Thanks Mustapha.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 10:14 AM
If there was ever a poem worthy of repeating this would be it.
Oyewole Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 11:14 AM
lol. The bad network caused the repetition and I've rectified it. Thanks Richard.
May Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 8:11 AM
great write AO.....best wishes
Oyewole Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 11:12 AM
Thanks Joseph
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