Doubtless

I Know

If I should abandon myself
In the seed of your heart,
I know, I would germinate.
If I should cry
In the lines of your palms,
I know, you would dry my tears.
If I should confide myself
In the sea of your love,
I know, I would not drown.
If I should lose my sight
In your brighter light,
I know, I would go no blind.
If I should lose my tongue
In the preaching of your course,
I know, you would not let me down.
If I should lose my hands
In your forever fullness,
I know, I would not be wretched.
If I should abandon myself
In the beauty of your mind,
I know, I would not regret.
If I should forget myself
In the caressing of your soul,
I know, my life would not be the same.
If I should take the bold step
And scale through those narrow paths to you
I know I would be victorious

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Date: 8/29/2014 5:11:00 PM
Abdulhafeez, thanks for supporting my one WORD title contest. Enjoy the win. ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/2/2014 7:49:00 AM
Enjoyed the write. Congrats on the win,
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Date: 5/1/2014 11:08:00 AM
Abdulhafeez... Congratulations! Enjoying every entry, ENTERED in my "Any Poem #26" contest. Always & Forever *LINDA"
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Date: 2/5/2014 4:49:00 PM
Great write AO...congrats on your win
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Date: 2/5/2014 9:28:00 AM
Great one Oyewole, congrats on your winning. Kayod5.
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Date: 2/5/2014 12:29:00 AM
IT impressed me too and congrats on the win,
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Date: 7/15/2013 10:55:00 PM
Very beautiful. Many congrats Abdulhafeez.
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Date: 7/15/2013 8:10:00 PM
"an awesome win. always & forever *LINDA"
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Date: 7/15/2013 7:09:00 PM
Abdulhafeez, Congratulations, glad you decided to enter this free verse in my contest. :-) love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 7/8/2013 7:30:00 PM
i like this one, but I feel it would be unfair to you (as we readers) to put the punctuation marks,for I know we can not give justice for a well crafted poem as this.This is a powerful poem no doubt. and personally I would like to read it with your intended punctuation marks.that would complete the pleasure of reading this. nicely done.that's just a simple request as a friend AO, happy writing
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 7/11/2013 9:36:00 AM
I will punctuate it as requested by you. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 7/1/2013 8:34:00 AM
VEry nice, and I love how you ended it with "I know I would be victorious" Doubtless makes a great title for this.
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 7/1/2013 11:15:00 AM
Thanks my lady for dropping by.
Date: 6/30/2013 10:44:00 AM
This is just fantastic.Well done!
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 7/1/2013 11:15:00 AM
Thanks Mustapha.
Date: 6/30/2013 10:14:00 AM
If there was ever a poem worthy of repeating this would be it.
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 7/1/2013 11:14:00 AM
lol. The bad network caused the repetition and I've rectified it. Thanks Richard.
Date: 6/30/2013 8:11:00 AM
great write AO.....best wishes
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 7/1/2013 11:12:00 AM
Thanks Joseph
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