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Fear lies in wait, anticipating dreams; then, shreds them bit by bit as each ascends. But, just afore, allows one great embrace; ensuring well-earned praise for crafty schemes. ========== 12/21/19 Excerpt from "Unending Grace" For Arbitrium Divisa 5 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Gregory R Barden

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Date: 1/5/2020 11:02:00 PM
Hello, those are some great lines, well done and best of luck in the contest _ Constance
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Date: 1/6/2020 9:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance! :)
Date: 1/1/2020 8:09:00 PM
I don't see anything new so i will leave a comment here... just wanted to wish you a Happy New Year... blessings and hugs :)
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Date: 1/1/2020 8:50:00 PM
I haven't been able to write or spend time here recently. I'm thrilled you stopped by... Thank you so very much, Sandy :') Happy New Year!! Hugs and blessings <3
Date: 12/31/2019 1:02:00 PM
Beautifully done. Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/1/2020 12:09:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! Happiest New Year to you!!
Date: 12/31/2019 10:41:00 AM
True. Blessings for a fear free 2020!
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Date: 1/1/2020 12:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, Richard!! A beautiful wish, indeed!! Happy New Year!!
Date: 12/29/2019 1:48:00 AM
I love this insert and it's message, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/29/2019 5:10:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! :)
Date: 12/28/2019 10:02:00 PM
This is a great choice for the contest, H.T. I think Greg will like this. Going to rest my eyes now so I'll read your initial poem in the morn. Sweet dreams...and thanks for your visit. Wish you a happy and healthy New year! Hugs always, Charlie
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Date: 12/29/2019 5:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie, for everything!! Wishing you a happy and healthy New Year, too! Hugs :)
Date: 12/24/2019 9:07:00 PM
Merry Christmas Hello There. -Richard
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Date: 12/26/2019 6:01:00 PM
Merry Christmas, Richard!! :) Thank you!! <3
Date: 12/23/2019 8:16:00 PM
fear can cause many things to crumble before us....wonderful pick for the contest...powerful verse... :) Merry Christmas to you and yours my friend.. hugs :)
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Date: 12/26/2019 6:00:00 PM
MERRY MERRY CHRISTMAS!! HUGS!! Thank you very much <3
Date: 12/23/2019 3:58:00 PM
I remember this poem and what a fantastic choice for the contest. Kind of dark but very cool. This should do well in the contest. Best wishes my friend.
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Date: 12/26/2019 5:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Chris!!
Date: 12/23/2019 2:00:00 PM
Very cryptic ink advice, Hello. It surely will take much wiser eyes than mine to appreciate. A poem of much deep thought expressed. May love light your path in life always.
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Date: 12/26/2019 5:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Freddie :) It is rather dark, but I liked that it could stand on its own. Thank you for your kind wishes! :)
Date: 12/23/2019 6:05:00 AM
It seems like an individual poem.. Great write.. Good luck..
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Date: 12/26/2019 5:57:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jenish ~ I was actually looking for 4 lines that could hold their own :) I appreciate it!
Date: 12/23/2019 5:24:00 AM
Fear leads to all negative aspects.. great choice for this contest..
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Date: 12/26/2019 5:55:00 PM
I changed my original title "Fear is no Friend", because I thought of the circumstance where fear can actually keep you on your toes under very dire circumstances. Thank you so much, Silent One!
Date: 12/21/2019 7:36:00 AM
These two lines alone should guarantee a win for you: Fear lies in wait, anticipating dreams; then, shreds them bit by bit as each ascends. Much depth to your write, HT.
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Date: 12/21/2019 7:25:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay ~ I appreciate your confidence in these words :)
Date: 12/21/2019 1:35:00 AM
Very good one H.T. best of luck in the contest
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Date: 12/21/2019 7:23:00 PM
Thank you very much, Gregory :)