Doubt and Desire
Man to his sweeheart:
Curious to know why
you rejected all my advances...
doubt built up quickly.
Woman to her sweetheart:
I wouldn't have refused...
if you had not been so shy,
making me feel loved;
and like you, I have desired
to be held so tight.
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