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Doubt and Desire

Man to his sweeheart: Curious to know why you rejected all my advances... doubt built up quickly. Woman to her sweetheart: I wouldn't have refused... if you had not been so shy, making me feel loved; and like you, I have desired to be held so tight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/11/2011 12:51:00 AM
enjoyed this awesome verse. Harry
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Date: 3/10/2011 11:11:00 PM
desire tends to kill doubt though though especailly when you really want it, is this for the contest? if yes good luck :) enjoyed your poem
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