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Doubt

The tinkling of chimes The whistling wind Whispering in the ear Memories,all left behind. Walking with a new life Eyes sparkling with colors Each swift stride Taken with doubt... For remains that feeling The feeling of yesterday... Maybe it was the wrong choice Or a hurried decision ... It is irreversible now She can change But not change back.. Yet that feeling remains In the back of her mind... Nagging constantly ... Reminding her of Her previous life... Outside-determined Inside-broken... A choice can change all...

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Date: 1/23/2016 10:58:00 PM
SAANVI, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 1/15/2016 6:07:00 PM
I really like this. It's easy to read and yet profound at the same time.
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