Doublee Bleu (Reversed-Verse)

create
for me a song
so blue, that doves dare swoon
'pon gentle breeze, hear elfin cries
swallowed
~
swallowed
'pon gentle breeze, hear elfin cries
so blue, that doves dare swoon
for me a song
create
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 8, 2010 at 1:52 PM
cool on both the verses..P.D.
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July 7, 2010 at 11:44 AM
Very good on both meaning ...Very romantic feel ...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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