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Geronimo was one hell of a strong fellow!!!!

I mean that fourteen different ways The heat of summer makes me sway Sami Davis Boy could he play That was yesterday Arthur have you heard? Jean's now that's absurd History always doubles up Sami are you ok? Cause I will delight if I may Should a doctor smile and say Twins!!

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/23/2018 11:59:00 AM

aha, the fastest bullet ( and there are miliions of 'em) hits the egg, and twins at that, lol, arthur... huggs

Darren White

Date: 7/22/2018 12:56:00 AM

Sami is ok and happy :) Love this!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/21/2018 3:02:00 PM

I saw you post the twin poem as a triotlet - shame there isn't a form called a single lay lol lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/21/2018 4:33:00 PM

Ops I thought the form was "tryalot" LOL

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/21/2018 10:38:00 AM

Hello Art!! Enjoyed this one very much!! Twins, eh?? I echo Tim's comments too. Geronimo was a strong swimmer and a master horseback rider -- as the Union army in his day found out as they pursued him!! Best Weekend Wishes, Gary

Tim Smith

Date: 7/21/2018 6:42:00 AM

Lol...hope it's the same father...Geronimo was a strong swimmer I heard