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Double Trouble

There lived a man and his wife Who buzzed like bees in a hive The tension between them was rife They stung each other with knives They somehow survived these fights It got worse when they turned on the lights She was never a good looker But was keen on her lips to have a pucker After botox and filler she resembled a gorilla His reaction he mouthed to her was mean Shouting and yelling he let off steam And exploded like a pressure cooker! 10.9.2021

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Date: 10/26/2021 11:44:00 AM
This is really cute and funny, Carol. Excellent entry for the contest. Witty & whimsy. Congratulations on your placement! hugs Charlie
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Date: 10/26/2021 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your fun story/win. Thanks for the laugh. Have a blessed autumn day...................................
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Date: 9/11/2021 5:17:00 PM
haha. FUN light verse, Carol!!!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 9/11/2021 9:45:00 PM
Thanks Andrea....haha glad you liked it....all the love :)
Date: 9/11/2021 9:34:00 AM
wow, she sounds hot with temper , beware of a woman scorned, lol, nicely done dear poetess, thank you for sharing, have a blessed day and keep well :)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 9/11/2021 10:02:00 AM
Thank you Mystic Rose Rose.....you are always welcome :)

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