Double Trouble

There lived a man and his wife 
Who buzzed like bees in a hive
The tension between them was rife
They stung each other with knives
They somehow survived these fights
It got worse when they turned on the lights
She was never a good looker
But was keen on her lips to have a pucker
After botox and filler she resembled a gorilla
His reaction he mouthed to her was mean
Shouting and yelling he let off steam
And exploded like a pressure cooker!

10.9.2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Messina Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 11:44 AM
This is really cute and funny, Carol. Excellent entry for the contest. Witty & whimsy. Congratulations on your placement! hugs Charlie
Goldsmith Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Congratulations on your fun story/win. Thanks for the laugh. Have a blessed autumn day...................................
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 5:17 PM
haha. FUN light verse, Carol!!!
Mitra Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 9:45 PM
Thanks Andrea....haha glad you liked it....all the love :)
Rose  Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 9:34 AM
wow, she sounds hot with temper , beware of a woman scorned, lol, nicely done dear poetess, thank you for sharing, have a blessed day and keep well :)
Mitra Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Thank you Mystic Rose Rose.....you are always welcome :)
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