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Double Tanka

Double Tanka

If all was lucid
If god was not a mystery
If life lacked meaning
If life was pure reasoning
If night was empty of dreams
If sky had no birds
If snowflakes held no wonder
If rainbows were grey
If love was a chemical reply
If so, wouldn´t it be hell?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/22/2012 9:20:00 AM
What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Jan. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2012 8:18:00 PM
VERY inventive, jan. I Like it alot.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 2/22/2012 5:40:00 AM
Thank you Andrea

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