Double Tanka

Double Tanka

If all was lucid
If god was not a mystery
If life lacked meaning
If life was pure reasoning
If night was empty of dreams
If sky had no birds
If snowflakes held no wonder
If rainbows were grey
If love was a chemical reply
If so, wouldn´t it be hell?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 9:20 AM
What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Jan. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 8:18 PM
VERY inventive, jan. I Like it alot.
Hansen Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 5:40 AM
Thank you Andrea
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