Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Rhyme

Double Sunset

I live atop a Mountain, look to the East , the sky Kaleidoscopes , Red and Pink
I live atop a Mountain, look to the West, the sun so brilliant your Eyes Blink

To the East You see the Dusk creeping, slowly across the lush Landscape
To the West, the sky Kaleidoscopes, Red and Pink, the sun plans its escape

 In the Eastern  firmament, the first star of the evening  awaken by sunset: Shines
The Western Atmosphere feels the Slowly creeping Dusk,slowly through the Vines 

A Full Moon displays the shadows of Earth , Gone are the colours of the EAST
If YOU want to see this again : Watch For the first Star of the Western  Sky
                                        ( Deceased )

The EAST -  “ SUNRISE “   ~~~   The WEST - ” SUNSET “
                         TOGETHER FOR EVER

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Andrew Nashat April 28, 2011 at 4:04 PM Wow this is an extraordinary peice :)

Nette Onclaud April 24, 2011 at 3:31 PM oh my, leige.. i'm stunned by the beauty of this piece; so lyrical!! winning's best to you, dear friend!! and thanks for acknowledging my work for your contest.. i had so much fun thinking of something a tad different for you.. :) huggs!

Barbara Gorelick April 24, 2011 at 8:20 AM Such a lovely poem...I love the line " the sun plans its escape" and think about the dusk slowly creeping through the vines. Well deone HG...Love...BG

Poet Destroyer A April 24, 2011 at 8:03 AM Good morning, Daniel a very lovely poem.. very intriguing view... this arouses my minds mentality.. I'm a sucker when it comes to watching the sun set and rise... very beautiful... hope you enjoy your wonderful Sunday... and have lots of Easter family fun... p.d.