Double Senryu

precious moments
staring at the setting sun
love of orange

fiery highlights glint
auburn and chestnut
Sunset hair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Sambourne Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 2:01 PM
Another beauty. Striking, sharp words to catch a setting sun with a nice bridge to human connectedness in the final lines. Cheers Brian
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December 16, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Hi Brian, so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your comment.
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November 24, 2020 at 8:21 AM
Vivid imagery...
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November 24, 2020 at 5:31 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Bangalee Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 2:18 AM
beautiful imagery
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November 24, 2020 at 5:31 AM
Thank you Mahtab, I appreciate your comment.
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