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Double Senryu

precious moments staring at the setting sun love of orange fiery highlights glint auburn and chestnut Sunset hair

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Date: 12/16/2020 2:01:00 PM
Another beauty. Striking, sharp words to catch a setting sun with a nice bridge to human connectedness in the final lines. Cheers Brian
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Date: 12/16/2020 4:48:00 PM
Hi Brian, so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your comment.
Date: 11/24/2020 8:21:00 AM
Vivid imagery...
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Belden Raiser
Date: 11/24/2020 5:31:00 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 11/24/2020 2:18:00 AM
beautiful imagery
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Date: 11/24/2020 5:31:00 AM
Thank you Mahtab, I appreciate your comment.

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