Double Dactyl

Hickory dickory,
Beauteous Rosamond,
Sleeping so silently
One hundred years…

Come your awakening,
Phantasmagorical,
When a Prince Charming can
Conquer your fears.



~ Harley White
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ravidas Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 7:37 PM
Agreed. I just mean that ductyl looks like waltz musically.
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April 18, 2019 at 7:23 AM
Nice association... The 'double dactyl' (with an 'a') has a fixed structure. There must be two stanzas, each comprising three lines of dactylic dimeter... etc. Look it up and you'll see.
Ravidas Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 5:18 PM
Waltzing around sleeping beauty)
White Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 5:20 PM
I see those tales as sort of mythological...
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