Dormouse Dawn

There's an urgency to the ascending bleep of the alarm clock
Creeps in, nudging me from sleep.
I choose snooze, just five minutes more 
And visions of the evening before, 
When a tiny dormouse was seen, 
Tip-toes back, drifts into my dream. 
Persephone, the hazel dormouse, 
Quiet queen of the hedgerow, 
Has wintered in her haven of the underworld, 
Slumbered in her bushy tail curled softly around her. 
She's stirring as the returning light of this spring equinox 
Dispels winter's gloom.
Persephone is awoken by a cacophony of floral symphonies, 
New blooms a carillon of bluebells reverberating 
In a tintinnabulation of campanula indigo tones 
Reverberating with the violet and lilac peals of the grape hyacinth.
Persephone's ears prick to the tinkle and chime 
Of the lilies of the valley, bellissima! 
And in the distance, a golden merriment of daffodils and narcissus 
Are trumpeting in the new spring.
In my dreaming, I am as teeny and tiny as Persephone,
She and I look at each other, and then up to the vast sky.
We nod a greeting to the lonely cloud wandering by.
Together we gaze at the brimstone butterfly,
Fierce and ablaze in his sulphureous yellow, 
Herald to the new day. 
Then my pictures of Persephone are slowly fading away,
She's leaving to go break her fast on the delicacy 
Of nectar, caterpillar and aphid, which she likes the most,
Whereas me, now awake, I get up.
I go make tea and toast.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Callus Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 2:22 PM
I am amazed that so far no comments have been posted here!! This is a beautiful poem teeming with delightful imagery that appeals to our senses. Wasn't Persephone lucky to awaken to the tinkle and chime of the lilies of the valley...instead of an alarm clock! :) ~ Thank you for sharing Rachel. ~ Best regards // paul
Treacher Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 10:59 PM
Thank you for enjoying my tiny dormouse goddess of spring and Queen of the underworld!
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