Dormant Skeleton

On spooky table Lies a dormant skeleton With his skull lit up Candy surrounds the body A great treat for the fearful
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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September 6, 2012 at 5:55 AM
You make this scary tanka flow so nicely, Russell. I am spending the first part of my morning sipping tea and reading thru a dozen or so poems of yours. I am so far behind in reading my friend's great work...I also noted how you have risen to a higher level of excellence by placing rather well in these poetry contests. This is to be commended. I salute you and your love for WORDS! :) gwendolen
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August 31, 2012 at 12:05 PM
I like the contrast of the eerie skeleton and the sweet candies surrounding it.
Kendrick Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 5:27 AM
That could scare a person senseless..Ha!..Good Halloween write..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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August 30, 2012 at 9:39 PM
Another halloween theme...spooky !!
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