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Doris

Doris my baby girl Tubes and devices Medicial technology No matter the modernist The pain and suffering Doesn't quit still a part When one has to have Help for the damaged part But you had a sense of Humor, said they had Used WD-40 and duct Tape to hold you together May the great physican Be with you tonight Greet you with the morning light Bring you home where's your heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/21/2009 5:04:00 PM
Mother and daughter together in crisis. I can't imagine a more stressful time than this. - An emotional heartfelt piece. I was truly moved. Best Wishes Always Sara. Bill
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Date: 11/15/2009 1:27:00 PM
very nice dedication
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Date: 11/12/2009 3:31:00 PM
Sara, i hope all is well with Doris and her recovery >> James
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Date: 11/11/2009 1:39:00 PM
Great read Sara.I really enjoyed it.thanks for the comment.Teresa
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Date: 11/11/2009 8:27:00 AM
I believe that your poem helped Doris to stand her operation. So everything was ok. And thanks for commenting Dreams.I wrote it today when I was tired from packing. And thanks for the hint to correct comments. Gert
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Date: 11/11/2009 12:14:00 AM
Amen Sara.Thank you for your kind words and comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/10/2009 3:41:00 PM
Very nice poem Sara...Is Doris okay? Marty
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Date: 11/10/2009 3:20:00 PM
Here Here Sara, I'm sending good thoughts to Doris today. May she feel the love and energy of all her family friends today. Love Light Patty
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