Doppelganger

To be more like me and be less like you I shall take off the mask of disguise Bury them to the depths of oblivion Extinguish them to the point of no return I shall take off the mask of disguise I shall take off the cloak of invisibility Extinguish them to the point of no return I’ll take my heart and identity back I shall take off the cloak of invisibility I will stand tall, walk straight I’ll take my heart and identity back Along with my liberty I will stand tall, walk straight Do not stagger, do not fall Along with my liberty I shall dance with life Do not stagger, do not fall Although I’ll find dilemmas I shall dance with life and experience how to live Although I’ll find dilemmas Bury them to the depths of oblivion And experience how to live To be more like me and be less like you

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2013 9:43:00 PM

Lala, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/26/2013 4:47:00 AM

much enjoyed congrats on feature Shadow x smiles

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/26/2013 4:41:00 AM

hi Lala very nice congrats on feature Shadow x smiles

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2013 11:16:00 PM

I like your poem Lala, -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Lala Merx
Date: 7/12/2013 11:42:00 PM

Thank u, really, for the support and words of encouragement :D I'll try to join the contest and fit it with my school sched :D thank u for the invitation

Skat A

Date: 7/12/2013 4:48:00 PM

Lala, thank you for sharing your deep emotions.. , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"

Lala Merx
Date: 7/12/2013 11:40:00 PM

It's my pleasure, writing poetry, thank u for the support, and words of encouragement :D Hi Friend ~~~ >w<

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2013 6:58:00 AM

- Hi Lala, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

Lala Merx
Date: 7/12/2013 8:03:00 AM

Aww, thank you :D that's also my first pantoum... I've been trying hard, thank u, god bless, and love to u from the Philippines :D