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Dope Delirium

I swear I saw a cat; she held a cricket bat and swung it at my head; I danced upon the bed; and then a dog appeared - his clothing looked so weird: a hat and floral dress, all tattered - what a mess! And flying cows in jeans, all eating jelly beans, were herding singing sheep; oh, boy, that snow is deep... for Kai's Delirium contest

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Date: 7/29/2020 8:16:00 PM
Ha ha I want some of that delirium stuff you speak of and maybe then can make some sense out of all of this mess. Just kidding. Hope all is well with you and mum Jack. Have a great week. love phyl
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Date: 7/25/2020 8:05:00 PM
I love your limericks Jack, which come to mind as i read this wonderful gem, I once had a reaction to medication, your poem here, took me back.
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Date: 7/25/2020 7:57:00 AM
I so enjoyed this dope poem - creative write and really great fun! Blessins and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/19/2020 7:01:00 PM
Reads like a good contender. I think you have had some experience with people seeing things that are not there so you could write this one fairly easily. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
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Date: 7/19/2020 4:05:00 PM
hahaha. you are on SOME kind of dope!! Love it, Jack.
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Date: 7/19/2020 2:19:00 PM
Gosh, Jack...I did tell you not to play around with those substances!! :) Thank you for the entertainment. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/19/2020 1:06:00 PM
Very funny, Jack! This should do well in the contest. You're so creative. Hugs, Carolyn
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