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Doowoo On the Train

i lay back head on the rack had my napp sack they came in you could hear the blend i got hook it took my mind off other things it was DOOWOO ON THE TRAIN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/1/2012 4:44:00 PM
I liked the strength evolved in this piece. At first the reader is not sure who the 'you' is and assumes you are speaking about the reader - the surprise comes at the end when finding it is 'God' you are speaking of. Well done.
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