Doorway To Imagination

DOORWAY TO IMAGINATION

“I open the door and cross the threshold of imagination” When I was past young I had a wild imagination Like a prolific thing It has passed the qualifying. An introducing, knowing and the test of loving Soon yet subduing Pondering is now exacting It has become everything. Because it’s deafening Someone in us truly loving For in you there is no withdrawing Yes in the threshold is no denying. Obstacles and distance are nothing And wishing there would be no ending Waking up there is no doubting Eventually and beautifully satisfying! I closed the door behind, opened the next one with overwhelming joy!
The three forms : free verse, rhyming, monoku Poet‘s Name: Dalila Agtani Contest name: Three Gems Date poem written: 7/30/11 Date written noted: 7/30/11
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La France Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 3:15 PM
Congratulations Dalila, on your win in my contest with this beautifully written poem~~
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by Constance La France "Three Gems" Dalila. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 12:04 AM
I especially liked that last monoku, you sure ended the poem in a very positive light. Congrats on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 11:47 AM
Congrats Dalila on your wonderful third place win with these brilliant lines of poetic expression luv. enjoy...
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:44 PM
anxiously awaiting the read Dalila and I also have one I think already posted a while ago called "Grandma's Trio"..all about those sweeties and cuties..luv..
Cooke Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 6:29 AM
excellent poem, good subject matter, very well executed. i like a lot
Villanueva Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:28 AM
really amazing thoughts ....a wonderful doorway to enter...~~~smile~~~good luck to the contest~~~*-*junjun
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