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Doorway To Imagination

DOORWAY TO IMAGINATION
“I open the door and cross the threshold of imagination” When I was past young I had a wild imagination Like a prolific thing It has passed the qualifying. An introducing, knowing and the test of loving Soon yet subduing Pondering is now exacting It has become everything. Because it’s deafening Someone in us truly loving For in you there is no withdrawing Yes in the threshold is no denying. Obstacles and distance are nothing And wishing there would be no ending Waking up there is no doubting Eventually and beautifully satisfying! I closed the door behind, opened the next one with overwhelming joy!
The three forms : free verse, rhyming, monoku Poet‘s Name: Dalila Agtani Contest name: Three Gems Date poem written: 7/30/11 Date written noted: 7/30/11

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Date: 8/16/2011 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations Dalila, on your win in my contest with this beautifully written poem~~
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Date: 8/13/2011 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by Constance La France "Three Gems" Dalila. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2011 12:04:00 AM
I especially liked that last monoku, you sure ended the poem in a very positive light. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/12/2011 11:47:00 AM
Congrats Dalila on your wonderful third place win with these brilliant lines of poetic expression luv. enjoy...
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:44:00 PM
anxiously awaiting the read Dalila and I also have one I think already posted a while ago called "Grandma's Trio"..all about those sweeties and cuties..luv..
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Date: 7/31/2011 6:29:00 AM
excellent poem, good subject matter, very well executed. i like a lot
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:28:00 AM
really amazing thoughts ....a wonderful doorway to enter...~~~smile~~~good luck to the contest~~~*-*junjun
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