Doorway

Soft echoes of night whisper dark stories to me. Mystery beckons. First light pierces morning fog, the world of dreams dissipates. 09.04.2017

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Date: 6/7/2017 8:59:00 AM

Subtly beautiful!

Date: 4/14/2017 7:21:00 PM

I am seeing all the ones I liked so much getting on the winners' list. AwESOME. and congrats.

Date: 4/14/2017 10:41:00 AM

Lovely! Congrats!

Date: 4/11/2017 6:25:00 PM

Another great tanka. I love this form!!! By the way, I love your name. It's almost like Lilah (name of a beautiful cat I had) L words are lovely!

Leileah Kasperyan
Date: 4/11/2017 7:01:00 PM

Thank you! It's closest to Lilia but Lilah is pretty too :)

Date: 4/11/2017 2:05:00 AM

That third line so expertly divides your wonderful tanka. Great poetry. And the whole is a beautiful, dreamy image.

Leileah Kasperyan
Date: 4/11/2017 7:03:00 PM

Thank you Darren!

Date: 4/10/2017 6:02:00 AM

Beautiful write Leileah...GL in the contest.....A7

Leileah Kasperyan
Date: 4/11/2017 7:03:00 PM

Thank you kindly Joseph.