DOORS TO YOUR HEART

Poem of the Day 3-24-19
child, I wish I could bear all pains for you but then some doors in your heart would never swing open
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Allison Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 1:18 PM
we can be there for someone but cant take away the pain only be there to listen. CayCay its so good to see this on the winners list:-) hugs Jan xx
Agustin Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 4:50 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Radice Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 11:33 AM
Perhaps the only way round a problem is through it? Your kimo is very profound CayCay and I'm not sure I've gleaned the tue meaning behind your wonderfully profound words but I have certainly loved reading them. Cheers - Gary
Goldsmith Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 10:58 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. "Wonderful" Have a blessed day/weekend..............
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 10:00 AM
I'm back with my congrats on this stunner, Caycay. Hope I will hear from you maybe tomorrow!!! I'm busy today going out with my daughter!
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 14, 2019 at 2:04 PM
Very beautiful. Captured with so few words.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 14, 2019 at 5:42 AM
Your poem is climbing to the top of the best new poems list CayCay. Congratulations. : ) xxoo
Lindley Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 9:39 AM
Back again to read this fine poem this morn. That is the thing in life, when some doors are closed. life with give opportunities for others to open! One must be ready and willing to see and take hold of such gifts.. Exceptional poetry my friend! A fav..
Lamoureux Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Congrats on being #5 in the top 100 new poems!
Marc Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 10:19 PM
So true.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 8, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Beautifully put Cay Cay
Lindley Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 7:58 PM
Belated congratulations on POTD honors bestowed my wonderful friend!!
Raven Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 11:07 AM
Hi Cay Cay, dropping by with belated congratulations on your well-deserved |Poem Of The Day honour with this wonderful write. have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 8:40 PM
Hello Cay Cay, I do like this poem. there is a message here loud and clear. have a nice evening my friend.
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 5:42 PM
Returning to add to more comments for I see you high up on the best poem list. Brilliant poetry..precious few words deliver potent message. No wonder your poem is climbing high on the best poem chart! Congrats CayCay!
Godwin Avatar
March 28, 2019 at 6:10 PM
Thank you, Vijay, for taking the time to go back a bit on my list. It is always nice when that happens. Never imagined this as POTD material so I was most surprised! Enjoyed your comments ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 6:00 PM
this is so deep, Caycay. I actually can understand how it got POTD.(it's the one you were surprised about? )I think it rocks!!! Congrats on POTD
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 7:54 PM
I am so happy to see this gem honored for POTD CayCay. Congratulations! : ) xxoo
La France Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 2:55 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your win in my contest. and wow POTD also, wonderful 3 lines beautifully penned ~
Castellenas Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 3:32 AM
Honest, straight and true words. No wasted words written.
Messina Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 9:18 PM
Such a beautiful Kimo poem CayCay. True to the heart. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD...Charlie
Nicole Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 4:06 PM
I know this feeling, wishing that I could take the pain away. However, like you state here and it is true. The heart would stay closed, and that isn't healthy. A heart will heal in time. This is beautiful and tender. Congratulations CayCay, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Trifiatis Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations dearest, CayCay!
One Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 2:17 PM
This one ia very deep... We have to open our hearts so we can heal...Grear kimo and congrats on potd..
Roper Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 1:26 PM
Good verse, CayCay, congratulations on POTD Hugs Eve ~`*
Michael Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 1:22 PM
Good one...Congratulations CayCay...Lovely title too...All the best
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